Week 5A

Today in class we gave feedback on everyone's rough layouts. Feedback I received was leaning towards less copy on a page, maybe organizing from busier to less depending on his day, and it was suggested not tilting the text because it does not go with the type of article I am designing for. Based off this feedback I am going to refine my layouts for next class. I am going to research different illustration styles, horizontal layouts and implied components. I am also going to try to define the illustration style more for the layouts.