Below are the photos of my most recent printouts with the feedback comments written on after our quick critique.
The main comments on my impact page was to make the top glyph even smaller which I agreed with. So suggested to get rid of it but I disagreed because then it would not display the polite to angry narrative as affectively without the smaller purple glyph. I feel this effect will read much better once the prints are in color.
The other comment was about the bolded text which was the main change from last time. This is something I am still working to fix for the final print. As of right now I have made the body text purple to connect to all the rest of the body text which I realized was all purple. The bolded text will now be black and possible a sans serif font. I feel that this is a beneficial change because now even the text speaks to her polite side (purple, small, serif) and her angry side (bold serif and black).
The overall comment on my communication page is that the column on the first page (third page) is difficult to read. To easily remedy this I switched that column back to left aligned to match up with the column on the right page.
There was not much feedback about this page. Everyone seemed to enjoy it and believe it worked well as a closing page. The comments on the actual feedback page mirrored what was written on the layouts.
I spent the rest of class applying these changes and getting ready to print the color copies.
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