Today we spent the main part of class critiquing our black and white print outs.
The main feedback I received on the one above was to adjust the line length and make the top glyph smaller. Also to go into illustrator and clean up the lines on the larger glyph. The feedback on the one below was more about fixing the rag.
It was discussed and I decided to create three spreads instead of two. So I am currently choosing what the third spread should be and I am planning on lengthening the columns on the spread above for Wednesday's class.
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